Two Painterly Forms

Inspiration can come from all sorts of places; nature, life, love, art. For two new poetic forms, art is the primary inspiration.

First, we consider the Rothko. Mark Rothko is a painter whose work consists of overlaid, solid-color rectangles. So it's no surprise that poetry based off his work would have the same elements of color and shape. The rules for a Rothko are these:

1. A Rothko must be written while standing in front of a Rothko painting.
2. The poem consists of three lines, three words each (similiar to haiku, no?)
3. The poem must include three color words, arranged so that their positions in the poem will make a "tic-tac-toe".

An example I wrote (while sitting in front of an image of a Rothko painting on my computer screen):
In dreams red
poppies white clouds
green grass float

The simplicity is what makes this work so well for me. It's a lot of fun to try and say volumes in nine short words.


The second form we'll look at is the Pollock. No, this has nothing to do with Poland. Instead, as you may have guessed, it is named after the painter Jackson Pollock. The first line of such a poem is a quotation, and the rest of the poem consists only of the words and punctuation found in the quotation. Not a terribly difficult premise, but the results can be quite deep. For example:

830 Fireplace Road (2)
by John Yau

"When I am in my painting, I'm not aware of what I'm doing."
When aware of what I am in my painting, I'm not aware
When I am my painting, I'm not aware of what I am
When what, what when, what of, when in, I'm not painting my I
When painting, I am in what I'm doing, not doing what I am
When doing what I am, I'm not in my painting
When I am of my painting, I'm not aware of when, of what
Of what I'm doing, I am not aware, I'm painting
Of what, when, my, I, painting, in painting
When of, of what, in when, in what, painting
Not aware, not in, not of, not doing, I'm in my I
In my am, not am in my, not of when I am, of what
Painting "what" when I am, of when I am, doing, painting.
When painting, I'm not doing. I am in my doing. I am painting.

(taken from here.)

More information on both of these forms can be found at About.com.

A poem and an apology

In keeping with the last two posts, I have decided that this week's sample of my poetry will be a haiku. I call it "Ducks":

Blue lake, seven ducks;
Three happy pairs, one alone--
I know the feeling.

And now for the apology: I am sincerely sorry that I have been lax in the upkeep of this blog. The past couple of weeks have been pretty crazy. However, I have this entire weekend free and therefore vow to catch up as much as possible, and promise not to fall so far behind EVER, EVER again, if not for the sake of my grade, then at least for the sake of my own sanity.

So... look for more updates to come, post haste!

Haiku: Part 2 (hey, that rhymes!)

There are thousands examples of haiku on the internet, in blogs and other places. Here's a quick look of some of the best and most interesting sites:

suchlike.net: news in haiku
In this little gem of a site, the author reports one important news story per day in haiku form. Though he does not follow the constraints for subject, he does adhere to the form rules (syllables and line length). Not only do his poems give a succinct (if not terribly artistic) description of a news story, but he also offers links to articles and other information on the story in question. For a good example, check out this post about Wal-Mart's newest building site.

Also, in one post, he links to a contest run by The Guardian (a UK news service) that basically encourages people to do the exact same thing, express headline news in haiku form. Looks to me like the idea is spreading.

Ben Guaraldi | Haiku
This is another daily haiku blog, but more artistic than journalistic. Though occasionally there is some mention of current events (see Red Sox 2), the bulk of the entries are made up of the traditional "scene snapshot" type poems that follow the 5-7-5 syllables/line mandate.

In my mind, these particular haikus bring up an interesting idea. Traditionally, haikus were supposed to be centered around nature. The idea was at least in part to bring about awareness of one's surroundings. In modern times, however, peoples' surroundings are becoming constantly less "natural", and more manmade, with cars and buildings and streetlights and sidewalks replacing trees and rivers and mountainscapes. In light of these changing conditions, might a change in the focus of haiku be justified? For example, look at this poem. There is a clear sense of place and time here. All the "haiku rules" are followed, yet this poem has nothing to do with nature. Still, it is a snapshot of a scene in city life, one that is familiar to people, and looking at the event (in this case, a truck rumbling through the streets in the early morning) through the eye of a haiku necessarily makes us aware of this particular sort of event. I believe that this is the goal of haiku; not just to say pretty words, but to call attention to the minutae of life in order to allow people to appreciate it more fully.

Conscious-Living Poetry
Admittedly, this blog is not solely focused on haiku. But a fair number of entries are written as haikus, so I think it's perfectly valid to include mention of it here. Unlike the previous blogs, Don (the author) does not seem to feel beholden to the 5-7-5 syllables rule. Most of the pieces that he calls "Haiku Moments" seem to pay no attention to traditional rules of haiku, and yet in my mind it is doubtless that they are truly haikus. For some beautiful examples, look here or here.

I will argue that some of the poems he calls haiku might not qualify. For example, this poem, though it is well-put and wise, breaks a lot of the rules of haiku. How many of these rules can you ignore before a poem ceases to be a haiku and becomes something else? It's a question I can't answer.

Other Haiku Blogs: FiveSevenFive and Haiku the Blog

If any of this has given you the inspiration to try writing your own haikus, there are a couple ways you can go about it. Jane Reichhold's article on haiku techniques is worth a read if you are interested in constructing your own haikus. This article may also be helpful (and is much shorter). If you don't want to go through all that study, you could try the interactive Create Your Own Haiku toy. Or if you're REALLY lazy, just let The Genuine Haiku Generator create a random haiku for you.

Final thought (courtesy of the Genuine Haiku Generator):

homicidal loose
eternal illusion sings
lustfully, drunk bronze

Haiku: Part 1

Haiku seems to be a very popular form for poetry on the internet. This is not surprising; it's a simple form, easy to use, deep, yet accessible. Also, it is short, in keeping with the current collective attention span of the people, which is approximately the same as that of a goldfish.

For the uninitiated, a quick definition: Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry. Traditionally the rules are thus:
1. The haiku is composed of 17 syllables in three lines.
2. The first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7, and the third has 5.
3. The haiku is about something in nature
4. There is one word or image that gives the poem a "season" (sets it in summer, autumn, winter, or spring); for example, "snow" denotes winter, "leaves" denotes autumn, etc.
5. Similies are not used; the idea is to give a snapshot of a particular image, not to compare it to something else.

There are various other rules that you can write by as well; see Haiku Rules That Have Come and Gone for a list. Traditionally, these rules had to be followed in order for a poem to be considered a haiku. However, in recent times, the haiku has been adopted by non-traditionalists, and many of the rules have gone out of favor. For example, since traditional haiku was written in the Japanese language, some people say that the rules about syllables do not apply to poems written in English or other languages. Also, it seems that more often, current haikus are written about subjects other than nature. I'm sure that a lot of people have seen the Haiku Error Messages that have been floating around the internet and sent hundreds of times as e-mail forwards. No longer are haiku poems the realm of only Zen masters and the like; they are very much a part of popular culture.

To be continued

Poetry Place #1: g r a p e z

Can poetry be compared to fine wine? It takes high-quality elements in order to produce a good wine, and a good poem. The great ones get better with age. The best never get old, but only grow more and more mature, and are not only usable, but at their most delectable, centuries after their creation.

You might be able to say that g r a p e z is a bit of an extended metaphor. To be sure, not all of Greg's entries have to do with poetry; as I write this, there is a post up about music, and more than one on the recent presidential debates. But many do, and what he does with them is... well, pretty darn interesting, to say the least.

I can't even remember how long I've been following g r a p e z (probably close to 6 months? Or longer?). It was my inspiration for this project, so I figured it was only fitting to start by looking at it. The first thing you need to know is, this isn't simply someone's personal poetry page. He does put his own writing up (it's really good: look at "Bridge Construction Down to One Lane" or my favorite, "Disbanding Number One", which is much less recent, but one that stuck in my memory), and occasionally even gives us a glimpse into his own revision process, but he spends more time commenting on and analyzing other peoples' poetry. Sometimes, he'll just comment on it (see Gary Snyder's Zen Confessions), and sometimes, he'll actually pick it apart (see R S Gwynn Aces Rhyme or Something Gold Can Stay). He's able to get down to the technical grit of a poem, look at rhyme and meter and all those things that I feel aren't taught very much anymore, nor studied individually.

He will also link occasionally to articles or other blogs that talk about the craft of writing poetry. These are so useful to me, because I feel that I know very little about technique. My own education has included a lot of focus on words, but not on how to shape a poem. So something like this post about an article on tone can be really helpful.

In all, g r a p e z is a great source for intelligent analysis of poetry and the craft of creating it. I only hope I can do so well with this project.